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~Munazza Bangash.
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Tuesday 23 April 2013

Legendary Writers!

[Well, this is sort of a rant, so if you're not comfortable with it, then don't read it.]
Well, let's start of with what the topic is. The topic is, well, bad grammar, unoriginal and totally cliche plot, unrealistic scenes, meaningless sentences, jaw-dropping silly mistakes, and they call them legendary writers! It makes me wanna pull out my hair. 

I mean, a writer works on his/her work so much, that he thinks working more than that gets impossible. He works on everything, from spellings to crafting, from grammar to plot, and first sentence to the last one. They work hard. They review their fiction. Again and again. Until, they're completely satisfied with their work. And let me tell you, no writer, I repeat, no writer is ever satisfied with their work.

And then there comes a few writers in the industry. In my point, they want the fame only. Even when they ask for a critique, they actually want a comment on their stories. I mean, seriously? These people don't care about their writing. all they want is to gain fame. But how are they gonna gain it? With that unoriginal plot of theirs?

They copy others. Maybe, changing the dialogues a bit, but the plot, the story line, agh, they remain copied. I mean, they don't even feel stupid copying others. I know, I would. And then their writing. *Pulls out hair* It frustrates me so much. Their grammar and spellings... Are they writing? Really writing? I mean, they can't even bother to read it once or twice. Not even applying a spell-check. A clumsy writer? Seriously? *Pulls out more hair.*

Their sentences make no sense, whatsoever. Nor do I like the way their characters are. Unoriginal. I mean, their stories are far from reality. And the genre is not even Fantasy. Agh! 

But "The cherry on the top" is that some readers call them LEGENDARY! I know, right? Legendary? Instead of making them improve their writing, they're boosting their should-not-be-having EGO! *Face-palms with both hands*

Look, I'm not saying that I'm perfect and all, but I am learning. I am trying to improve my writing. To let people enjoy it. But, they don't have to try. Just copy a famous plot, add a few far-from-reality characters, throw everything in the face, praise yourself in the first paragraph as introduction to the character, and there you go...A legendary writer!

*Drops dead of the torture*

The Heartless winter


It’s been a damn good run, readers, and it’s time for the next novel...an official one.

The Heartless Winter...the book I just wrote. I'm publishing it, and distributing in most of the areas of Pakistan. You can also find it as an E-book on Smashwords and other sites.

Blurb:


"What do you say about a seventeen year old girl who got burned alive by her loved ones?
 
Mistakes are a part of life. You make mistakes until the day you die, and most of them, you learn from. But what if your whole life was a mistake? What if you were the mistake? That a girl who loved you made the biggest mistake of her life?

I had a girl, she loved me more than anything, and she was crazy about it. Because she couldn’t live without me. Because she loved me and I loved her back…Because she was burned alive because of it…"

Some of the reviews on The Heartless Winter: 


Miss_Imperfect_: "Unbelievably good... Awesome... Mindblowing... Words are ending... but i cant explain how well the story is written.. how much i loved it... AMAZING..."
basswrites: "You are brilliant writer, and wrote a goose-bumpy, possible tear-jerking story. Bravo!!!!! Got my vote!!!!"
 wattiehottie: "I loved it.. the story was simply breathtaking, i was holding my breath as i was reading the story, as i was afraid i might miss one word and thoroughly spoil the story.. My heart aches for the guy and the girl, i do hope they meet in the afterlife.. Thumbs up for this one.. :)

 Links:

Smashwords

Wattpad

 Don't forget to drop a comment!

~MunazzaBangash.

Xoxoxox

Wednesday 19 September 2012

Let It Fall!

“May be I was over him, may be I liked someone else. But maybe, just maybe, I was a very good liar…” Mona has gone through many things in her life… She regrets her past, her present and she surely knows that she’ll be regretting her future. Love was in the air, happiness was on its way. Then why did everything have to fall apart? Mona was strong enough to leave everything behind; everything that she ever wished for and everything that she ever wanted in her life. She had to leave him… She had to leave Jack! But God had willed differently. He came for her and found her getting soaked in the rain---the weather which was made for them. The rain beat to the drum of her heart thumping in time with her rapid thoughts. She heard the words unspoken and true. The words that she could barely hear due to the drumming of the rain, words that he whispered in her ear, "Let it fall and let us get soaked, for it’s the best when I'm with you."

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This was a little trailer to the story that I've written. To read the whole story, check out this link: http://www.wattpad.com/story/1534631-let-it-fall-being-edited-by-me Don't forget to tell me what you think! :)
~Munazza Bangash.
Xoxoxox

Saturday 8 September 2012

The real me: Tormented...

[VERSE 1]

Every little while...
My tears find a way out...
I try to hide...
But stop and scream outloud...

I feel torn,
Shattered,
Fell broken...

[CHORUS]

I feel tormented,
Feels like my heart is cutting down...
Feel disappointed,
In myself as I touch the ground...

I'm in deep, deep, deep pain...

I'm tormented... I'm tormented...

[VERSE 2]

Everyday I,
Wish for the sun to shine...
You pass by,
It's dark now when you're not mine...

I feel torn,
Shattered,
Fell broken...

[CHORUS]

I feel tormented,
Feels like my heart is cutting down...
Feel disappointed,
In myself as I touch the ground...

I'm in deep, deep, deep pain...

I'm tormented... I'm tormented...

[BRIDGE]

Tears... Agitation...
Regret... Frustration...

I can't take it anymore...
Every scratch bleeds, badly sores...
I give up on every hope...
Why I see you no more...?

I feel torn,
Shattered,
Fell broken...

[CHORUS]

I feel tormented,
Feels like my heart is cutting down...
Feel disappointed,
In myself as I touch the ground...

I'm in deep, deep, deep pain...

I'm tormented... I'm tormented...
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Oh well, I know this sucks... But I hadn't posted for quite some time so I decided to go with the first thing that came into my mind. I had written this song for a story. The author asked me to write it for them... I will be waiting for your comments. :)
Love you all...
~Munazza Bangash.

Xoxoxox

Monday 30 April 2012

The Real Me.. Runaway

[VERSE]
Nights are darker..
Every step I take.. I get lost..
Thoughts are deeper..
Every step I take.. I drown..

Every Emotion
Every Tear
My heart's portion
My every fear

You're my worst night mare
But I gotta show you..

[CHORUS]
I won't run away
Try the best of you
Make it cold.. What you say..
But I won't runaway

Try me.. tear me apart.. break me.. break my heart..

But you gotta know...

I won't run away
Try the best of you
Make it cold.. What you say..
But I won't runaway

[VERSE]
Fog ain't clear
When I try to see.. I can't
Fire ain't soothing
When I try to breath.. I can't

Every step's like
Hell to me
Every word is
scaring me

You're my worst experience.. But I gotta show you..


[CHORUS]
I won't run away
Try the best of you
Make it cold.. What you say..
But I won't runaway

Try me.. tear me apart.. break me.. break my heart..


But you gotta know...

I won't run away
Try the best of you
Make it cold.. What you say..
But I won't runaway

[BRIDGE]
Lots and lots of pain..
Lots and lots of hurt..

But at last..
I see the light..
At last..
I see clear sky..
And at last..
I can breath..
At last..
I can see..

[CHORUS]
'Cause I didn't run away
You tried the best of you
Made it cold.. What you said..
But I didn't runaway

Tried me.. tore me apart.. broke me.. broke my heart..


yeah, now you know...

That I didn't run away
You tried the best of you
Made it cold.. What you said..
But I didn't runaway..
Didn't runaway..

Wednesday 8 February 2012

The real me... Music's mode

Music's mode is my mode baby..
Music's mode is my mode baby..
Music's mode is my mode baby.. oh woah..

whenever my heart wants to listen music..
i get ready, wear my glasses and my cutex..
i do my meni, pedi and get out of the door..
i reach at disco and dance.. every one say they want more..

music is in my head baby..
listening it in my bed baby..
hear it you'll be glad baby.. oh.. woah..

music.. music.. music..
evrywhere is music..
everything brings music..
rest fo my life music..

Music's mode is my mode baby..
Music's mode is my mode baby..
Music's mode is my mode baby.. oh woah..

whenever i hang out with my friends..
we listen to music while holding hands..
suddenely i see spotlights shining on me..
suddenely i am what i always wanted to be..

                                  i sing...

love the way your life is baby..
on your throat there a knife is baby..
being with me best life is baby.. oh woah....

thay want your love you should give it baby..
that's your life you can live it baby..
what i say u should believe it baby... oh woah..

music.. music.. music..
love the way it is..
you don't wanna miss..
the love of your life is this..

Music's mode is my mode baby..
Music's mode is my mode baby..
Music's mode is my mode baby.. oh woah..



SO... that was the song.. did you like it?? :)

Friday 27 January 2012

The real me.. Intro..


          Hello, I was thinking that I should write lyrical poems... Oh I've written many, I'm just thinking to post few of them.
          So, the name would be "The Real Me!”
          I'll start posting it very soon. I hope you guys like it. If you like my poetry, suggest me some of the topics. The songs are mostly about love, dreams, dancing, parties, broken heart etc.
          Well, that was it! Thank you…

TAKE CARE BECAUSE I CARE...
LOTS OF LOVE
~Munazza Bangash.
Xoxoxox